All of the characters designs are pretty samey. Except, I admit, I thought you'd have the Jamal spared and become an anti-hero. You've also failed to create ANY sort of dramatic tension, and I could pretty much tell how this entire story would play out from start to finish. You've failed to A: Create a half-way engaging or surprising storyline, B: Make me give a shit about ANY of the characters in the smallest amount, and C: Create dynamic and interesting battle structures that DBZ is famous for. Your story-telling skills are pretty below par, even for DBZ standards. Now, I'm trying my best to be nice here but I just can't, I'm sorry. Also, the 'floating' transparant bangs that almost every character has is awfully distracting and just doesn't mesh well with the rest of the animation. However, any of the fire/attack effects are pretty below standard, and look pretty half-assed compared to the detailed characters. The animation is pretty smooth and I especially appreciate the good lip-synching. I applaud your animation and drawing skills. While the technical aspects are all pretty good, the actual content leaves a lot to be desired. I'm sorry, I have to write a review here.

Angels deserve to die